Your bleeding with rage
punches of hate from all sides
You take your time
with the blows
Of prejudice
blinded by nothingness
taken by hope
you raise your hand
into the fog of doubt
They tire with the disgust
of the faces
The pain of reason engulfes
your mind
You Step back
Stand tall
Raise your head
into the tunnel of hope
You think your free now
The sorry eyes wait for you
at the end of this duel
The wait of death
so sadistic
Take a deep breath
Open your eyes and FIGHT
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2 comments:
Eh thadicaran, the karate is getting into your head man. And it's good, coz that way atleast you'll shed some 'thadi'. And nice original way to write.. No rhyming words and constt. length etc., cool.That essentially shows a guy who doesn't give a fuck about rules and doesn't bother and puts out original stuff. Good originality should be appreciated, so here goes: YEYEYEYE! 3 cheers for john!!
Hey John Chetta, I realllllllllllllllly LIked this Poem named "OPen Your Eyes Fight" It's Superb, the World is turning into an Hatred & Sadist Universe. U r Gr8 Inspirer, Encouragor, Etc. Keep up the Good Work. MAy God Bless UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU 4 eternity My dear Good Brother.
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